If you have output that is separated by new lines, but you really want it formatted into a single line with commas as separators or maybe a space as a separator, just pipe to tr.
Here is a simple example:
kserver:~ patternbuffer$ diskutil list | grep ^/dev
/dev/disk0
/dev/disk1
If we want them separated by spaces, we could do:
kserver:~ patternbuffer$ diskutil list | grep ^/dev | tr '\n' ' '
/dev/disk0 /dev/disk1
Note that there is a newline on the end of the output, so that trailing newline is also translated. So if you don’t want it there, you’ll have to chomp it off. I use sed, but use what you like.
Here is the same as above, but with commas, with sed to remove the trailing comma.
kserver:~ patternbuffer$ diskutil list | grep ^/dev | tr '\n' ',' | sed 's/.$//'
/dev/disk0,/dev/disk1