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Editorial suggestions for consistent links to definitions and capitalization (#3038)
Co-authored-by: Francis Storr <francis.storr@intel.com> Co-authored-by: Kenneth G. Franqueiro <kfranqueiro@users.noreply.github.com> Co-authored-by: Mike Gower <mikegower@gmail.com> (cherry picked from commit 1b2d567)
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guidelines/sc/20/audio-control.html

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<p>If any audio on a web page plays automatically for more than 3 seconds, either a <a>mechanism</a> is available to pause or stop the audio, or a mechanism is available to control audio
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<p>If any audio on a web page plays automatically for more than 3 seconds, either a <a>mechanism</a> is available to <a>pause</a> or stop the audio, or a mechanism is available to control audio
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volume independently from the overall system volume level.
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guidelines/sc/20/error-prevention-all.html

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<dt>Reversible</dt><dd>Submissions are reversible.</dd>
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<dt>Checked</dt><dd>Data entered by the user is checked for input errors and the user is provided an opportunity to correct them.</dd>
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<dt>Confirmed</dt><dd>A mechanism is available for reviewing, confirming, and correcting information before finalizing the submission.</dd>
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<dt>Checked</dt><dd>Data entered by the user is checked for <a>input errors</a> and the user is provided an opportunity to correct them.</dd>
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<dt>Confirmed</dt><dd>A <a>mechanism</a> is available for reviewing, confirming, and correcting information before finalizing the submission.</dd>
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guidelines/sc/20/error-prevention-legal-financial-data.html

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<dt>Reversible</dt><dd>Submissions are reversible.</dd>
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<dt>Checked</dt><dd>Data entered by the user is checked for input errors and the user is provided an opportunity to correct them.</dd>
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<dt>Confirmed</dt><dd>A mechanism is available for reviewing, confirming, and correcting information before finalizing the submission.</dd>
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<dt>Checked</dt><dd>Data entered by the user is checked for <a>input errors</a> and the user is provided an opportunity to correct them.</dd>
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<dt>Confirmed</dt><dd>A <a>mechanism</a> is available for reviewing, confirming, and correcting information before finalizing the submission.</dd>
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guidelines/sc/20/focus-visible.html

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<p>Any keyboard operable user interface has a mode of operation where the keyboard focus
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<p>Any keyboard operable user interface has a mode of operation where the keyboard <a>focus indicator</a> is visible.
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guidelines/sc/20/language-of-parts.html

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<p>The <a>human language</a> of each passage or phrase in the content can be <a>programmatically determined</a> except for proper names, technical terms, words of indeterminate language, and words
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or phrases that have become part of the vernacular of the immediately surrounding
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<a>text</a>.
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guidelines/sc/20/link-purpose-link-only.html

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<p>A <a>mechanism</a> is available to allow the purpose of each link to be identified from link text alone,
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<p>A <a>mechanism</a> is available to allow the <a>purpose of each link</a> to be identified from link text alone,
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except where the purpose of the link would be <a>ambiguous to users in general</a>.
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guidelines/sc/20/name-role-value.html

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<p>For all <a>user interface components</a> (including but not limited to: form elements, links and components generated by scripts),
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the <a>name</a> and <a>role</a> can be <a>programmatically determined</a>; states, properties, and values that can be set by the user can be <a>programmatically set</a>; and notification of changes to these items is available to <a>user agents</a>, including <a>assistive technologies</a>.
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the <a>name</a> and <a>role</a> can be <a>programmatically determined</a>; <a>states</a>, properties, and values that can be set by the user can be <a>programmatically set</a>; and notification of changes to these items is available to <a>user agents</a>, including <a>assistive technologies</a>.
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guidelines/sc/20/pause-stop-hide.html

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<p>For any moving, blinking or scrolling information that (1) starts automatically, (2)
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there is a mechanism for the user to <a>pause</a>, stop, or hide it unless the movement, blinking, or scrolling is part of an activity
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there is a <a>mechanism</a> for the user to <a>pause</a>, stop, or hide it unless the movement, blinking, or scrolling is part of an activity
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guidelines/sc/20/reading-level.html

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guidelines/sc/20/timing-adjustable.html

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