Updates to release from feedback

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@@ -1,29 +1,28 @@
 # PostgreSQL 11 Released
 
 DD MONTH 2018 - The PostgreSQL Global Development Group today announced the
-release of PostgreSQL 11, the latest version of the world's most advanced open
+release of PostgreSQL 11, the latest version of the world’s most advanced open
 source database.
 
-PostgreSQL 11 builds on previous releases by further improving the overall
-performance of the database system and adds more features for working with very
-large databases with high computational workloads. This release makes
-significant improvements to the table partitioning system, adds support for
-stored procedures capable of transaction management, improves query parallelism
-and adds parallelized data definition capabilities, and introduces just-in-time
+PostgreSQL 11 provides users with improvements to overall performance of the
+database system, with specific enhancements associated with very large databases
+and high computational workloads. Further, PostgreSQL 11 makes significant
+improvements to the table partitioning system, adds support for stored
+procedures capable of transaction management, improves query parallelism and
+adds parallelized data definition capabilities, and introduces just-in-time
 (JIT) compilation for accelerating the execution of expressions in queries.
 
 ##### HOLD FOR QUOTE FROM CORE TEAM MEMBER ABOUT RELEASE
 
-PostgreSQL was open sourced over two decades ago and has become the preferred
-open source relational database for developers. The project continues to receive
-recognition across the industry, and has been featured as the
-"DBMS of the Year 2017" by DB-Engines and in the SD Times 2018 100.
+PostgreSQL benefits from over twenty years of open source development and has
+become the preferred open source relational database for developers. The project
+continues to receive recognition across the industry, and has been featured as
+the "DBMS of the Year 2017" by DB-Engines and in the SD Times 2018 100.
 
-This is the first major release since PostgreSQL 10 was released on October 5,
-2017. The PostgreSQL Global Development Group changed the release versioning
-scheme for PostgreSQL 10. The next release for PostgreSQL 11 containing bug
-fixes will be PostgreSQL 11.1, and the next major release with new features will
-be PostgreSQL 12.
+PostgreSQL 11 is the first major release since PostgreSQL 10 was released on
+October 5, 2017. The next update release for PostgreSQL 11 containing bug fixes
+will be PostgreSQL 11.1, and the next major release with new features will be
+PostgreSQL 12.
 
 ## Increased Robustness and Performance for Partitioning
 
@@ -62,7 +61,7 @@ using the `CALL` command, and are supported in the server-side procedural
 languages PL/pgSQL, PL/Perl, PL/Python, PL/Tcl, and the Server Programming
 Interface (SPI) languages.
 
-[HOLD FOR QUOTE ABOUT SQL STORED PROCEDURES]
+##### HOLD FOR QUOTE ABOUT SQL STORED PROCEDURES
 
 ## Enhanced Capabilities for Query Parallelism
 
@@ -77,7 +76,7 @@ the creation of B-tree indexes that are generated by executing the standard
 tables or materialized views from queries are also parallel capable now,
 including the `CREATE TABLE .. AS`, `SELECT INTO`, and `CREATE MATERIALIZED VIEW`.
 
-[HOLD FOR QUOTE ABOUT PARALLELISM]
+##### HOLD FOR QUOTE ABOUT PARALLELISM
 
 ## Just-in-Time (JIT) Compilation for Expressions
 
@@ -87,7 +86,7 @@ expression compilation for PostgreSQL uses the LLVM project to speed up the
 execution of expressions in WHERE clauses, target lists, aggregates,
 projections, and some internal operations.
 
-[HOLD FOR QUOTE ABOUT JIT]
+##### HOLD FOR QUOTE ABOUT JIT
 
 To take advantage of JIT compilation, you will need to install the LLVM
 dependencies enable JIT compilation in either your PostgreSQL settings file by