From 848fc455c9b55d910e112013582b34b03205c0c6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Sarah Conway Schnurr <sarah.conway@crunchydata.com>
Date: Wed, 14 Aug 2019 09:39:42 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Next round of updates

---
 templates/pages/inclusion.html | 44 +++++++++++++++++++---------------
 1 file changed, 25 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-)

diff --git a/templates/pages/inclusion.html b/templates/pages/inclusion.html
index c232bc6..bf7246b 100644
--- a/templates/pages/inclusion.html
+++ b/templates/pages/inclusion.html
@@ -19,10 +19,10 @@
 <!-- Description -->
 <div class="container-fluid mt-4 px-0">
 	<div class="row">
-		<div class="col-sm-4 mb-4">
+		<div class="col-sm-6 mb-4">
 			<div class="card">
 				<div class="card-body">
-					<h5 class="card-title mb-4">COC</h5>
+					<h5 class="card-title mb-4">Code of Conduct</h5>
 					<p class="card-text">
 						PostgresOpen is a nonâprofit, communityârun conference series in the United States focused on PostgreSQL,
 						the worldâs leading open source database.
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
 				</div>
 			</div>
 		</div>
-		<div class="col-sm-3 mb-4">
+		<div class="col-sm-6 mb-4">
 			<div class="card">
 				<div class="card-body">
 					<h5 class="card-title mb-4">Venue</h5>
@@ -45,7 +45,10 @@
 				</div>
 			</div>
 		</div>
-		<div class="col-sm-4 mb-4">
+	</div>
+
+	<div class="row">
+		<div class="col-sm-6 mb-4">
 			<div class="card">
 				<div class="card-body">
 					<h5 class="card-title mb-4">Childcare</h5>
@@ -59,23 +62,21 @@
 				</div>
 			</div>
 		</div>
-	</div>
-
-	<div class="row">
-		<div class="col-sm-4 mb-4">
+		<div class="col-sm-6 mb-4">
 			<div class="card">
 				<div class="card-body">
-					<h5 class="card-title mb-4">Quiet Space</h5>
+					<h5 class="card-title mb-4">Quiet Room</h5>
 					<p class="card-text">
-						We always work to provide a quiet space for people to use for whatever purpose that they need. Need to do
-						a bit of work? Are you a speaker who wants to look over your slides? Do you just need a quiet place to sit
-						for a while and relax while getting away from the crowds. Regardless of the reason, we always make sure a
-						room is available for that purpose.
+						We will be providing a quiet room available to all attendees to use for whatever purpose that they need. Need to do
+						a bit of work? Do you just need a quiet place to sit for a while and relax while getting away from the crowds? Regardless
+						of the reason, a room will be made available for that purpose.
 					</p>
 				</div>
 			</div>
 		</div>
-		<div class="col-sm-4 mb-4">
+	</div>
+	<div class="row">
+		<div class="col-sm-6 mb-4">
 			<div class="card">
 				<div class="card-body">
 					<h5 class="card-title mb-4">Food Accommodations</h5>
@@ -88,15 +89,20 @@
 				</div>
 			</div>
 		</div>
-		<div class="col-sm-4 mb-4">
+		<div class="col-sm-6 mb-4">
 			<div class="card">
 				<div class="card-body">
 					<h5 class="card-title mb-4">Speaker Support</h5>
 					<p class="card-text">
-						We always work to provide a quiet space for people to use for whatever purpose that they need. Need to do
-						a bit of work? Are you a speaker who wants to look over your slides? Do you just need a quiet place to sit
-						for a while and relax while getting away from the crowds. Regardless of the reason, we always make sure a
-						room is available for that purpose.
+						We recognize how important it is to have our speaker lineup also reflect the audience that we want to serve.
+						To that end, weâve put a lot of emphasis on inviting speakers from a diverse background to bring their knowledge
+						to our audience.
+					</p>
+					<p>
+						Speakers are provided with a dedicated quiet room for getting ready before their presentation; this space
+						could be used for reviewing slides, making changes, clearing the mind, or whatever else is needed. Additionally,
+						all speakers have the right to request one-on-one mentoring from someone on our committee if advice or assistance
+						is desired for improving a talk, public speaking skills, or with any other questions or concerns.
 					</p>
 				</div>
 			</div>
-- 
2.39.5

